>>3199240I must be grinning like a retard right now. Thank you very much, Anon!
I love it, I love how you draw her. I can see how you took your time with the hair, and there are some parts that you detailed parts that I still struggle with when I'm trying to make her appear in front of me, on the blank paper. These twintails are as cute as difficult for me to tranlate.
I like her expression, like she's looking at me, in this state, this pitiful being that is nothing without her.
I love the details on the clothes. And I like how you choose clothes that suit her. She looks so cute, I want to extend my arms and hope for her to come to my arms so we can share a warm embrace.
Did you try to emulate the original style for the face? Because I love that, and it makes me feel so guilty sometimes, because I seem to be unable to replicate it. But you did a great job, so you're allowed to feel proud about it!
And do not worry; if you did screw up the lineart, I have no way of knowing. You know far more than me about that!
I don't want to make this too long, but I want to ask you something: does that photo album contains photos of both of us? Memories?
By the way, I don't know if that was your intention, but she looks more mature then when I draw her. It suprised me in a positive way. It feels like she's also grown a little while being together. It makes me feel kind of nostalgic, and I love it. I don't know if you know it yet, but because her powers, she's unable to grow. There's more details about that, but I think I'll omit it for now.
This must be the best birthday ever. Her wishing me a happy birthday; such a simple and silly thing, but denied by such distance between us. Distance that is shortened thanks to such a wonderful person that drew her.
I don't think I can thank you enough, Anon!