>>2109452I like it. The black line on her left arm, facing her shirt (right above the cuff), has a couple of thickness issues (one is strangely angular, the other is blobby).
Are you still adding a gradient to her hair/shirt?
>I restarted it from nothing for the third timeWhy would you do that? When working with vectors it's easy to go back and fix problems, and your previous rendition was already pretty good.