>>3183476We tried to tl it as close to the original as possible, so even the text structure itself might sometimes seem alien to English speakers.
Yeah, the dialogues look better now and I personally agree with every single edit of yours, so if you actually feel like going through the entire chapter - consider joining the discord group (site -> contact us) to get access to the shared doc and just edit it directly, without wasting time to explain what you did and why. No deadlines whatsoever too, just do it at your own pace.
