You're doing great, translator bro. Thanks. There's only one error I can spot. The rest are just me being extremely picky like last time, so I won't get into them. However, I can type them up if you're interested.
>>1950575>Kirino didn't came with me!That's the biggest error and probably the only actual one.
>Kirino didn't come with me!Honestly instead of fixing it I would just change it to
>Kirino deserted me!Since this is Ayase and the scene is meant for comedic purposes, it fits perfectly and you can get away with it.
>>1950568>MemeruI dont know if it says that but Kirino saying "Meru-chan" later on makes me wonder if it's a typo. I just wanted to point it out.
Hopefully you see this. I should probably post this in the new thread as well.
