>>2713911Finished reading this too, I liked it a lot even I prefer the Pudding one! The highlights this time for me were
>sexy Shinobu>big dick Momo (no homo here)>Yamato and Hiyori didn't notice they were naked at first>great focus on Yamato udders even when she was fucking Momo too>Yamato and Momo holding hands while fucking (cute)>the open ending with Momo wanting to mess with Yamato moreI thought I wouldn't like Momo intentionally whoring out Yamato and Hiyori like that but after reading your story I came (pun intended, kek) around to it.
Now if you let me express my autism towards new work, I didn't really enjoy Yamato being that sex-driven towards Momo. I know that the last chapter scanonically support the facr she finds him hot but I think Yamato is unironically too retarded to even understand how sex works even if she read Oden's diary and knew he had a harem.
Meanwhile we know that Momo is a canon pervert so imagine if part of him growing up also involved him stopping being a childish perv. He can't simply rub one out after seeing her body and he is tired of just groping titties so after his big speech, he's 100% motivated and this time he goes straight to the action with Yamato now that she is naked in front of him, fucking her.
I don't know if you would like Yamato being submissive but that's how I feel about her character in your story.
Still liked your story a lot, anon!
