>>2721210>>2721218Quick update
Still writing, I've decided I'm going to make a separate chapter featuring the sex scene following from the first part, and upload them both back to back
Shouldn't take long to finish but... truth is I don't read many lewd fics so I have no idea if what I'm writing is any good or not
I worry I'm being too wordy with describing the acts and going on too long about what they're thinking and feeling, and I dunno if that's a necessity when writing smut; I assume pacing is very important?
I want to be sure I'm not writing something that only I will like
