>>752118idk what ur on about you've got your gestures down stat
try dabbling in line width variation for the lineart yknow like thicker line for border in shadow and thinner lines for the sides more exposed to the light source
seeing your other more finalized uart you seem to apply a somewhat even line thickness so why not experiment with that
there was an art infographic someone posted about this specifically which i cant find for the life of me
feel your art would def benefit from minor tweaks
also personal opinion but do experiment more with high contrast color palletes i iked the direction this one:
>>749688 was going in
