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Anonymous Sun 27 Nov 2022 02:23:41 No.725925 View View Reply Original Report

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I’m doing a drawing for my gf and I feel like I lost too much motion between the initial sketch and what I have now. Should I just start over or can I salvage it? What should I do to fix it?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 27 Nov 2022 02:28:57 No.725929 Report

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>>725925
Now that I’m looking at it posted I’m seeing my flaws. the arms on me are too short and it isn’t straight enough to be dynamic. Also there isn’t really a body on my gf so it looks like it isn’t an attached form. Plus I made my back face the camera too much.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 27 Nov 2022 16:11:28 No.726052 Report

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You might get better input in >>>/ic/ since it's the critique board
My personal opinion is that there isn't much difference in the motion of the drawings so it would be okay to keep it as is, but if you think you can do better then redoing it is a good idea.

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