>>4228777here you go, a crappy snapshit of my own creation
since apparently you have to be a photographer to critique photography
>>4228838>maybe 'use a camera'?no, that was your first mistake if you can't take honest criticism
I understand disregarding nophoto shitposts, but not every nophoto is a shitpost, some nophotos just have no new photos
>>4228836i can't exactly diagnose this composition, but I think it lacks balance, and may be too chaotic. being closer to the runner, which appears to be the intended subject, might have been better, and would have created better background/foreground separation, which is an element that tends to be overlooked often.
congratulations on the (You)s btw, you did well
