>>4231938Good image., but what the fuck did you do with these
>>4231940 >>4231941especially the last one looks sloppy with the red crates. You had a good model and you shoot this slop.
>>4231981Nice, would've worked better if she didn't look at the camera. Reminds me of that famous painting of Ophelia's suicide.
>>4232273Underrated, love this shot. Good comp and lighting and using the BW format.
>>4232812Underrated. Good photo. The others are a bit too muddied due to the BW meshing the colors together. Especially
>>4232813 would've been perfect if the two in front would've left and you focussed on the kid. But I appreciate the guts you show in shooting people.
>>4232918Work on your DOF. Not my type of model but your flash is too harsh. Did you use an umbrella or? The contrast between the background and foreground is not big enough.
>>4232926Comfy, but too much ceiling. Would've squatted to shoot from a lower angle. Especially considering Japanese houses have an emphasis on the floor.
>>4233044Good boy. Looks like a beagle if so please pet.
>>4233056Works best if you blackened out the background. You used a flash so in theory you should've been able to.
>>4233156Nice light. A bit too dark in the dark spots
