>>4253752>>4253754The idea is good although not that original, but the color processing is splendid and those are keepers in my opinion. However, I feel like there is room for improvement in storytelling and showing motion. You can do many things with a sheet, letting it droop like a ghost is only one of them.
>>4253761>>4253762The composition is decent and the film look works well although it is quite a cliché at this point.
>>4253769>>4253758>>4253765On those I see really nothing. You seem to be good when there is a subject but here I cannot see any attempt at organizing these random scenes.
>>4253767The black horses make this layered landscape stand out, I like it.
>>4253768I see something in the soft style and attempt at composition but not so successful or interesting.
>>4253771Of the three it is the only one that kinda works, and I feel like it is mainly because of the film fuck up erasing her face. On the others I think you rely too much on the media and not enough on composition.
>>4253795Good play with the black space and good composition, although the face she's making could be better (maybe closing her mouth for an evocative smile would work). But still a keeper imo, it deserves to be cleaned.
Overall great job anon, thanks for the thread. Hope you make more.
