>>5883231Fix the ellipsis. Gotcha. I'll admit that it's definitely a habit of mine and that I can really overdo at times. So yeah, I'll absolutely try to cut it down somewhat.
Also, I love how you point out how you wondered if it was going to be highly violent/sexual based on the premise alone. It definitely was something I was prepared for if Anons pushed in that direction (though I wasn't going to write erotic shit, even if I'd be into it). Ironcically I was also just as pleasantly surprised by how reasonable and sweet most anons have been so far. I really did expect all the anons to be merciless war criminals.
I should mention that the violence definitely was upped in the 2nd thread, since you ou did mention only reading through the first thread. I did a little side-story covering a Diamond Dogs squad meeting one of the more violent and dangerous subjects
who literally was described as having a fucking 'crush-fetish' by one of the scientists they met. If you want to, I am curious how you'd feel about it since I definitely went far more into detail with the violence (albeit, while asking the anons if it was too much or if it was okay).
>>5883232Honestly, this is brilliant advice. Thank you. I do worry a lot about simultaneously wanting to flesh out the characters, without it becoming a slog to read through. I have been thinking about solutions, but this is something I'll definitely try out and see how it goes.
>>5883233I'll try and see if I got the time to look at these some time in the future. I am sadly both lazy and prone to procrastinate, so I can't promise anything for now. Still, I appreciate the help and suggestions you're providing.
So yeah, thank you so much for all of the advice. Hopefully, I can improve things further and keep the quest alive for as long as possible. I am so far very pleased with the few anons who have been really participating, and I adore how invested they have become in the setting and mystery. I don't mind if things stay the same for the time being, but having new anons joining in still would always be appreciated.
