Calling the vote now, sorry for the long wait. Figures machines spirits would be rowdy the moment I get back into a writing mood. And not just on my PC, heater isn't working and its cold as hell.
Trick Eldrad into joining you and Guozhi for dinner rather than meeting in his surely ominous study, to discuss what you came here to discuss:11
-Lure him out by ordering some food and floating up tot he window of his study, let the wafting smell of some good home cooking bring him to us: 3
Quiet the few Aeldari mocking Guozhi by encouraging him to display his psykerist techniques to them, teaching them a valuable lesson in humility:1
Join in on Guozhi's game, Eldrad probably foresaw you being late again anyways, and it is always nice to bring a smile to a young face:5
Keep a timely pace but maybe adopt an Aeldari social stance showing we are open to talk. Bring attention from our teacher to ourselves inviting challenge be it martial or debate... defeat/rebuke each in turn until we are at our destination:1
Just go meet Eldrad, you have slavers to catch and things to learn:2
Total votes:16
So Lieren will trick Eldrad into sharing a meal with Him and Guozhi as you discuss what you came here to discuss
Writing now
>>5805931>>5805933>Jinhai aspect warriors>Deldar becoming a journeymanYes, Yes! Loved how the way you described the action, Eldrad's thoughts and the details of their war gear. 11 out of 10.
>>5806466Enjoyed this as well, especially the ending
>>5807967>>5807970good music choices, excellent prose. really enjoyed this
>>5809459:)
