>>6117723>>6117724>>6117725The prose you used for this was phenomenal, you ever think of running a quest yourself? Really liked how you wrote Horus and Malcador, felt very true to text and their character, especially how Horus views the behavior and actions of others. Also like Kalus showing up, and that you used a real finnish name for Lieren's boy, and I especially like their duel, how it was described and its choreography
>>6119586Nope. Misses it by one. if the total was 14 or 13 votes, it'd get in. One less than half is the cut off point
So! Lieren will establish specialized martial schools to train candidates for space marine selection, and prepare his sons to defend the new colonies of Long-jia, as well as assistance of the Nameless' newest school, ensure the colonies are free from the stain of discord
However, sensing his teacher's impending death by extreme old age, he will, while the grounds for the schools are being prepared and the schools themselves built, take the chance to be taught a few, precious final lessons with Guozhi, exploring the Emperyean with him and Magnus.
writing now!
And good news everyone, its already cooled enough that I don't have to have my fan on full blast just to tolerate the heat!
