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Anonymous Sat 13 Apr 2024 13:13:42 No.55732174 View View Reply Original Report

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A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading.

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>>55664337

>Thread question:
Can the pokemon world ever be taken seriously as a fantasy/sci-fi setting? Or can it only ever be pointlessly edgy when trying to do so? Also I'm away from my computer and can't make a new Nurse Joy webm, sorry

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 03:43:55 No.55778691 Report

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>>55778655
the Christian Bale movie?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 04:08:03 No.55778789 Report

Quoted By: >>55778932 >>55779271

I am writing a harem fic starring Ash as the MC.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 04:08:11 No.55778791 Report

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>>55778594
>pokegirls are all sluts who want it
Then the next best thing is to torture and kill them. Maybe rape their corpse afterwards. It's a bit of a waste, but you'd leave more of a mark that way.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 04:28:19 No.55778873 Report

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>>55739001
You should post these publicly somewhere anon I know dudes who'd go crazy with this stuff

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 04:40:50 No.55778932 Report

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>>55778789
How many times has he been betrayed so far and does his harem and murder count number in the double digits yet?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 06:48:34 No.55779271 Report

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>>55778789
I was going to but I told myself no one would read it. It was inspired by PM Gals.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 06:53:12 No.55779277 Report

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>>55779271
Whoever told you that was lying. People read slop all the time. The real filter for readers is basic grammar.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 06:57:06 No.55779283 Report

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>>55779271
As someone who has never published a single chapter, people will read fucking anything as long as it's
a) readable(basic grammar)
b) appealing to their desires(Ash fuc k big harem show bob and vagona SEX SEX BOOBY SEX)
c) posted somewhere that people can find it and includes the important tags/keywords in the synopsis and title

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 12:32:04 No.55779885 Report

Quoted By: >>55780031 >>55780815

Least and most useless starter line?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 13:28:22 No.55780008 Report

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>>55778932
He never gets betrayed, his harem is in the double digits, no he does not murder people or pokemon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 13:38:24 No.55780031 Report

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>>55779885
SHITorita

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 15:02:40 No.55780227 Report

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>>55736117
>Unless I'm mistaken, the only person we know who's been negatively affected by Falling is Ingo
Didn't Anabel, Looker and Mohn all suffer from amnesia after Falling? Or are you referring to something else?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 17:29:09 No.55780772 Report

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Why is wattpad a shithole?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 17:39:12 No.55780815 Report

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>>55779885
When it comes to fanfics the answer is whatever starter line you hate the most.
But really, the answer is Chesnaught. I don't think I've ever read a fanfic that featured it.

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Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 18:20:16 No.55780990 Report

Quoted By: >>55781205 >>55781255 >>55781312 >>55783250

Writebros, give me longfics to read, I wanna enjoy stuff again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 19:30:18 No.55781205 Report

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>>55780990
How long are we talking?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 19:43:05 No.55781255 Report

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>>55780990
Order received, one power fantasy SI isekai slop coming right up.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 19:56:48 No.55781312 Report

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>>55780990
Your cringeslop, sir
https://archiveofourown.org/works/20976296/chapters/49878359

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 20:19:19 No.55781419 Report

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>>55781205
some REAL garbage, maybe something involving a school, too, those are long as hell.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 20:47:21 No.55781528 Report

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Anyone have the Guzma fic where there was a line that read something like, "He bucked his hips like a wild Tauros"?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 23:24:06 No.55782141 Report

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>>55781312
>Mature, M/F
Does he fuck the Mawile?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2024 23:27:25 No.55782163 Report

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>>55781419
I'm not really sure if this is the length you're going for, but I wrote this a some time ago. Maybe add it to your list or something.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/49048243/chapters/123742576

I am working on the sequel, too, which will be quite long.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 00:56:36 No.55782595 Report

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>>55782141
No, she gets NTRd by his childhood friend Gardevoir

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 02:04:44 No.55782884 Report

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>>55757991
Qrd?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 03:16:48 No.55783250 Report

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>>55780227
Anabel and Looker fell? I think I have gaps in my lore. I forgot about Mohn.

>>55780990
Go read that 1million+ word fic about Jasmine
https://archiveofourown.org/works/1609088/

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 05:11:32 No.55783679 Report

Quoted By: >>55783695 >>55784436

Would your Pokemon care if you're a Faller?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 05:18:19 No.55783695 Report

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>>55783679
Depends on the kind of 'Faller'.
Would you care if your coach was an alien? Probably, and maybe in a bad way if you don't like them already.
Would you care if they came from an alternate timeline Earth that's pretty different? Probably, but maybe in an interested way.
Would you care if they came from a practically identical alternate timeline Earth? Probably not.

Unless we're going with the "Fallers attract interdimensional metal gear murder machines with their very presence", in which case they'd probably care an awful lot if they knew about that bit.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 05:37:18 No.55783771 Report

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>>55779277
>>55779283
I might, then. The plot was Ash’s previous girls show up to Alola to celebrate his becoming champion but they don’t get along at first and fight for his attention. I was gonna call it “Alola, Sidepiece!”

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 06:26:16 No.55783951 Report

Quoted By: >>55783957

>>55783695
>"Fallers attract interdimensional metal gear murder machines with their very presence"
What? Is this from a game I didn't play.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 06:28:08 No.55783957 Report

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>>55783951
people who travel through ultraspace get the energy of ultraspace stuck on them which causes ultrabeasts to emerge from ultraspace at their location and fuck them up. Depending on the beast it could be something benign to something legendary class. Interpol uses fallers as bait sometime without them knowing to look out for these beasts or figures out what to do with them since they are like glowing tasty beacons for interdimension pokemon

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 11:27:31 No.55784436 Report

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>>55783679
Of course they would care, they care about you and this is important part of you.

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Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 15:46:48 No.55785186 Report

Quoted By: >>55785791 >>55785842 >>55787069

Is it just me or does anger rarely seem to land right? It feels like most fanfic expressions of anger are exaggerated in a way that makes them hard to take seriously. Every time I read about some protagonist's blood boiling it seems like an attempt by the author to make the protagonist look good/righteous/whatever to the audience rather than an expression of real character.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 18:23:58 No.55785791 Report

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>>55785186
I think the problem is a combination of inexperience and not understanding that characters are a means unto themselves that exist separately from them as a writer.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 18:35:50 No.55785842 Report

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>>55785186
is it just me or are like 90% of side characters/one off character's entire personality "sarcastic jerk but totally means well except can't respond to anything without making it a joke/marvel one liner/witty response moment"

I chalk it up to bad writing

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Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 22:50:26 No.55786995 Report

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>>55784436
I wouldn't deserve Pokemon, I'm not worthy of being a trainer....

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 23:05:49 No.55787069 Report

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>>55785186
And it always feels more like throwing a tantrum than actual rage. The context leading to the rage is typically minor and something I would expect a child to tantrum over.
>character gets inconvenienced / insulted one single time or sees a bad person do something mildly cruel to a pokemon
>character immediately enters a berserk state and begins their warpath of justice
Especially prevalent among protagonists. It reeks of marvel brainrot.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 24 Apr 2024 23:34:24 No.55787165 Report

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>>55787069
>People malfunction and become enraged at the smallest bit of opposition

So the standard internet user? Makes sense given the age/backgrounds of the majority of fanfic writers.

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Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 00:24:55 No.55787354 Report

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>>55787069
>reeks of marvel brainro
Bad writers having their characters overreact because they lack subtlety is in no way the fault of the MCU. It has been a thing for at least as long as the internet, if not far longer. Hell I was writing shit like that back in... probably 1998 or so?

Fuck I'm old.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 00:32:47 No.55787388 Report

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>>55787354
>my reaction when someone says pokemon isn't an idyllic paradise
those tits and hips on a 10-12 year old say otherwise

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Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 03:42:16 No.55788000 Report

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>>55739313
>create be capable
Maybe you should join him, retard.

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Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 08:39:00 No.55788833 Report

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>>55773482
i wish i could write as well as that author and be that dedicated but yeah modern liberalism is insane

the pokedex is mostly alright tho

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 12:41:28 No.55789273 Report

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Good thread

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 13:22:08 No.55789377 Report

Quoted By: >>55789861 >>55790728

Are Legendaries immortal? I'm asking because I've got the scene in my fic (hopefully coming soon) where an evil Pokemon eats Mew alive and I want to know if it's not too crazy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 15:31:43 No.55789861 Report

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>>55789377
>an evil Pokemon eats Mew alive and I want to know if it's not too crazy
Mew has access to all moves.
Teleport like an Abra.
Vore fetish denied.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 19:20:43 No.55790728 Report

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>>55789377
>>55789861
I'd make them unable to die of old age but capable of dying from external means.
Think Kame Sennin.

I remember that one old-ass edgefic where when legendaries died they'd basically go to paradise to chill but the catch was that they'd only remain on paradise half as long as their alive time and then respawn on the actual world and for every death they suffered their paradise time would be halved so legendaries started to lose it because the longer they lived the less paradise time they'd have and it reached a point where they'd kill their offspring as soon as they were born to minimize their paradise time so that they wouldn't know the pain of knowing what heaven is like but never being able to experience it properly or forever.

I think the main villain of that fic was a Celebi?

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Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 19:49:40 No.55790846 Report

Quoted By: >>55790859 >>55791298

I only read BETRAYAL™ KINO with guns, fuck Aura, Psychics and magic

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 19:52:41 No.55790859 Report

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>>55790846
You do?
Then recommend five you have read.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 20:10:05 No.55790946 Report

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>>55790859
that's the joke, since guns are basically non-existent in Pokémon fanfics that means I don't read...

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 20:10:53 No.55790950 Report

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>>55790946
Faker.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 25 Apr 2024 21:36:00 No.55791298 Report

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>>55790846
Betrayed fics are beginner level readings. True kino is having Ash fall to the darkside despite his friends and family still loving him. Ash going bad in order to protect them and falling farther and farther away from the person he used to be is peak fiction.

The idea that even the pure hero can be corrupted is an orgasmic storyline.

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