>>54684218yeah that looks great, though the skirt for the evo should be used like how some times girls hold their dresses up to carry things like pic related only with one hand since the other is holding the broom so one side of it would sort of droop down, also you could make the hat have a upward brim that can also hold things (think a sombrero, you could make it day of the dead themed too since it's basically Mexican Halloween)
as for f. herrel I also considered the name "dainty dandy" and " frilly fencer" for some nice alliteration.