>>53961754Holy shit, this is so good!! Amazingly written! My weakness, especially with newer characters starting out in their stories, is Capim Town descriptions and you nailed. The imagery you pulled off was fantastic. Mega comfy imagining all those pokémons in town going about their business, and it's funny but also cute that they want to smell everything because they're dogs lol.
I really love the dynamic between the two characters. With Gil being super excited to be in PMD and Bill being the more careful one with less knowledge of Pokemon.
And that singing section was lovely. I pulled out a spanish cover of Fly me to the moon just to go along with it.
Also Linoone cameo yay! Was a very pleasant surprise, love seeing my silly guy appear in stories =D 