>>55799852Finished reading Booker's learning to fly chap. 5
https://rentry.org/RibombeeFly5Great story! It was interesting to read KFC's training plan for the bug. One thing I noticed from your stories is that you give a good sense of space/location to the reader, which is great. I love how you explain the guild's layout, who goes where etc. It feels immersive which is nice. Another thing I liked was your inclusion of Casey! It was cool to see her past explained here. You do that everytime a new character is introduced in fact, you smoothly introduce them from Booker's pov by giving a line or two about their past/background.
I love how aware KFC is of humans. He seems to understand very well their predicament and handles it like a pro.
>when I told our guildmaster about my plans, he disagreed. I’m still not sure why he thought having you train on Zero Isle was a bad idea. It sounded fine to me.lmao. You know what? I agree with him I bet Booker would have learned a lot =)
I think my favorite line from this story is this
>we didn’t have any of that fancy metal... metal ugly... whatever it’s called.”
>“Metallurgy?” I suggested.
>“That’s what I said. Anyway,I fucking love when sneasel mispell words like that lmaoo
Loved the story, gonna read chapter 6 soon now
