>>53786752Just finished reading this, excellent job ribombee. Lots of really cool action scenes and great character moments. You did a great job at portraying their environments and emotions, that led to some awesome imagery.
I was a bit disappointed that the stuff from the draft involving the anchor and the Golett were scrapped, but all the other changes more than made up for it. Great, upbeat ending as well, and some really awesome music choices, they added a lot. Keep it up king.
Also kudos to you for writing a 15k word story in such a short time, you fuckin madman