>>53628127Pretty solid first entry, I like the bit with the racist Tinkaton.
The only real cricitisms I have is I think the first paragraph could be broken up a little more, just a few hits of Enter would make it easier to read.
The final line seems awkwardly worded, though I'm not sure if that was the point or not. I'd also have liked to seen the guild's reaction to it as well, but writing dialogue for characters you aren't too familiar with is perfectly understandable.