>>54399370This was so incredibly kino... Wow. The romantic cuteness completely melted my heart.
There are so many parts I would love to talk about, but my favorite I think were when Linoone tried his best to reproduce Debby's bird behavior like the preen and head rub. SO CUTE.
The flashback and Linoone delays revealing too much about his life to parallel Debby's hesitancy to reveal too much about hers was so good. It's smart writing, I liked how it shows that both love each other very much and feel bad having to hide things from each other. Superb scene.
And also the ending !!!!!!!!!
Her "I love you" as he left". This nearly made me evaporate on the spot>Also I didn't want y'all to think I was queer.Kek
>Red, 25, 12, Green, X-ray, Mike, Alpha, SierraRYLGXMAS ?
And It's neat that she fixed the
Windows OS iron bundle's head! I love that she wants to use it for greeting people
Provided, I assume, it doesn't scan Linoone again and reveals too much information lmao. Was funny seeing her change ideas suddenly and tell Linoone she should bring it back northIncredible story, and again, you write Linoone so well, thank you for featuring him!
>>54404559>I want to make the relationship feel natural, and the moments to really feel like a real moment.You absolutely nailed this feeling. The interactions between the two actually feels REAL. Really hard to pull off I think but when it's done right it makes for a more immersive story.
