>>53863487Cool idea. Here's one I threw together (I may change it as I give it more thought, but this should be mostly accurate.)
>>53859653Like others mentioned, I want more customization. Let us gather materials and design buildings, furniture, outfits, etc. Let us build the town up and do interior decorating in our home. I love that sort of stuff.
>>53859692Disturbing, but also funny.
>>53861726Nice. I couldn't see comments when browsing on my phone, so I was wondering if it was due to being on mobile, but I guess the issue was actually because I wasn't logged in on that device. Thanks for the update.
>>53862573I wonder if there's any point to polishing orbs like that.
>>53849866Nice story.
Cool to see Chespin and Wooper getting so many items and powers lately. It was also interesting to see them get separated and watch how Chespin acts when he's missing Wooper. The wand scene was funny too. And I can't believe Wooper is a chiller now... actually, I feel like that part could've been expended on to add a little more drama, and make a slightly more powerful emotional climax to the story. But it's okay as is.>>53853458I liked this one too. Great dialogue as always. The interactions between Cyndaquil and Alakazam, as well as the Lapras scene at the end, were hilarious. Cool final fight too.
I guess one critique is that the overall plot structure felt a bit weird to me, like it was two unrelated missions crammed into one. I also thought the narration of the combat sounded a bit stiff. But it was still an enjoyable read.
