>"a bit of formatting and editing" turns into rewriting entire paragraphs>already pushed the word count from 5.8k to a couple hundred over the 6k mark>scroll bar isn't even halfway down the storyONE
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What's a time where your character acted like the Joker?>>53436248>He's using it to pay Pokémon to become outlaws so he can put up job requests to stop them, paying the rewards out of his own pocket too. This will bring in more money for the guild, he says, because they'll have more jobs to get money from.>That's... actually a genius idea... but that's too big brain for him to do.Not genius at all. He pays the outlaws to go cause trouble - that costs him money. He also provides the reward for stopping them - again, out of his own pocket. The only money flowing into the guild is from that reward, which just comes from the guild's own treasury anyway, AND there's money flowing out - towards criminals, no less. All it does is waste money and fund outlaws.
