>>33833696Looks good, anon, but here's some constructive criticism:
Your lines for the pink sweater and pink glasses are too dark and bold. Compare them to both the scans and Wicke's official art, and you'll notice that the lines for the glasses and sweater aren't black, but a darker pink.
You forgot highlights for her eyes, so right now she's staring into my soul. Make her eyes and pupils more oval-like, and make her pupils slightly bigger. I would recommend relying more on Wicke's official art than the scan for her eyes.
Lastly, the buttons could do with some shading.
Overall though, lines, color and shading are spot-on. Good work.