ok, I've been playing Unite so I still have to read Snivy-anon's and everything posted after. This has been a wild weekend and I can't say I've experienced anything quite like it. I love all you autistic chucklefucks. Yes, even you. Still working on the oshawott rewrite; I'm unsure if it should be and origin proper like Meowstic's, or keep it more true to the initial prompt. It's up in the air and I'll probably get some second opinions.
>>53382093>Please tell me which parts I need to improve on.I'm not really in a mindset to get too critical (that's what /vpwt/ is for), but the formatting is the big thing that stuck out to me. So many one-sentence lines makes it a bit hard to follow, especially when there's little differentiation, formatting-wise, between exposition, subheadings, spoken word, and thoughts.
>>53382733yeah I've got that 9-5 debuff, but I'll still try to post after work (and lurk during the day, but don't tell my boss). Definitely won't be as much activity on weekdays, but the rentry will help keep things in order. I'll still be on the thread for another couple hours, probably.
