>>53685211Good ideas. I updated my concept a bit, with your ideas and some input from others too.
For the incline idea, are you saying the ground is level with the 1st floor on the front, but then slopes to become level with the basement in the back? Might be simpler to have the ground be flat all around, with a ramp dug into the ground to go to the basement.
>>53684895>>53684899Very cute! I love how you drew it, it's sorta soft and pleasant to look at.
>>53685076Thanks!
>>53686083I like the idea of incorporating the Pokemon/human fusion idea from the ideabin. I think that's a good way to do the split personality, if that anon really wants to go that route.
>>53686399Thanks! Glad you liked the ride part. I was really hoping I wrote it well enough.
>Chapter 3 soon(trademark) ?Hypothetically, I could get it out today, but I doubt it, since I'll probably spend too much time nitpicking and editing it. But I will finish it soon.
Also,
>sheC'mon, I know Booker's not the manliest Pokemon, but he's still a guy! Come to think of it, I wonder how often he's mistaken for a girl by strangers, with his cute looks and high voice... 