>>54099014Just finished, of course, this was pure kino, another incredible story from you Booker.
I'm insanely glad i've gotten to stick around and watch this story develop and grow, it's fuckin insane how much effort and talent went into writing this whole thing, you seriously did an excellent job and i'lll keep saying that over and over lmao.
About this story specifically, of course it was great. Dewott is still a really fun character despite being such a piece of shit, you handled him really well and overall he was just a great antagonist. That extends to all characters who cameod in this story, you did a great job writing all of them. Its always fun to see guildmons interact with each other, especially in such a high stakes situation like in this story. The fight scene was surprisingly violent coming from you, i felt, but thats not a complaint at all, it was really awesome. It does a good job showing just how nuts Dewott is. You really know how to keep the suspense cranked up to 11 at all times too, i really thought they were just fucked when the Petrify Orb came out.The ending was awesome as well, the whole parallel worlds thing has a lot of potential for other stories and im excited to see what you and other anons do with it. cool stuff. Plus it's great that Cooper has opened up more, its been so fucking awesome watching him develop. He's honestly a great character.Also also, Smith got mentioned, and showed up for 5 seconds, and his training grounds was the main stage for the fight, so yeah im calling based on that one because im biased.Overall another fantastic story and a great conclusion to Buckle Up. You're a fucking king Booker, im seriously hyped to see what else you come up with in the future