>>53636780The second round went a lot better than the first. That stupid fish boss is now chum.
And by that, I mean I beat it up and recruited it to my team. Yay.
>>53636518Really great story! I loved all the cameos from other characters, and I believe you handled them all well. It was very interesting to read about the results of what the Smeargle did, and the plan to solve it was pretty logical.
I liked the way they had to adapt to their new bodies and relearn moves, and the way their mindsets started to shift was intriguing. "Just how much of a Pokemon's attitude is determined by what they are?" is a thought-provoking quote and concept. And the idea that the Wooper species has an inherent, instinctive happiness and optimism is super adorable. The parts where they share the bed were also cute, especially the second time.A few minor mistakes here and there, like some missing punctuation (mainly in the vicinity of quotes), saying "site" instead of "sight", "than" instead of "then" in the last line, and calling Sneasel a guy one time ("I spot Booker on top of his head"). And there are some places where the speaker of a quote is unclear. But for the most part, it's pretty clean. Nice work, Chespin.
>>53636881I'm still not a fan of this design, but you did a good job making it. It's cool to see a 3d model like this.
>>53636955Thanks!
I plan to make a story (relatively) soon where he finally learns an attack. 