>>32740884I didn't get to reply in the previous thread where my request was fulfilled, so I'll thank the artist here.
Thank you very much for taking the request and completing it.
Now let me talk about the drawing.
I love the fact that it's fully colored.
The Oricorio there is perfect, kudos for that.
The Kahili outfit looks totally like one a cheerleader would use, the wing in her chest is spot on. I like the fact that you added a 2nd stripe to the tights, they look better that way.
Now let's talk about the face. I was expecting for a cheerfull or embarrassed look, but I see you tried going for an uninterest/bored look, I'm fine with that.
But I think there's one think you kinda messed up. Maybe it's because of your art style, but the eyes look weird to me. They have no eyelashes and the eyes have no iris, just a pupil.
Aside from that, it's a pretty good job, thank you.