>>50848421>>50848427>>50848455If I may offer a bit of feedback, your scenarios are good, your poses are fine (I think Serena should be leaning forward a bit to make it look more like she's running/walking), but your composition is kinda boring, especially in the first two pics of this scene.
Personally, I'd like to see some more close-up shots with more extreme perspectives, kinda like what you did in the third shot only moreso.
