I've been recruiting more and more guildmates in RTDX. It's real nice to see so many now-familiar faces join my team.
>>53845222This was good! Kind of straightforward, but it was nice to see these two finally join the guild. I look forward to seeing how they interact with the guildmates.
Also, the team name was hilarious, and definitely sounds like something Furret would make. Smith's ability to resist embarrassment is impressive, with how he wears that bow and accepts that team name.
>>53849866I finally got around to reading the first part. I liked the serious, introspective sections of it--I think you're handling them well. Also, you said you were unsure about the ending, but I thought it was fine.
I'll be sure to read Part 2 soon.
>>53851185Thanks for your hard work!
I kept checking the site because I noticed it was down for a while, hoping nothing was wrong. I'm glad to see it's back, and glad to see you're happy again. Happy Linoone is best Linoone.
>>53852279Every part with Chatot and Team Skull was so annoying. Playing Orion reminded me why everyone hates Chatot.
>>53852945Booker probably has a major sweet tooth, since his species' primary food source is sugar-rich nectar. He'll get something sweet, but he'd have to share with Sneasel since it'd probably be too big for him to eat by himself.
Sneasel likes tropical fruits. They're new to her since she spent most of her life in the frozen north. She may get some sort of tropical alcoholic drink.
>>53853436>>53853441Tacos are simple, Beast could totally make one.
>>53853313Great! I'm sure that feels nice. Good luck on turning the outline into the final draft.
>>53853458And congrats on finishing your story. Nice to see more people finishing up their ETF submissions. I'll read this one later.
