>>56628404Second draft. Comments from top to bottom in a nutshell:
>about James' height>split into 2 lines in clean copy>made him look slightly rougher and tallerShame about the 2 final draft version refs I was looking for apparently missing, but DAMN. That where some delicious finds. Not to mention I got to see the beta versions of 2 of my husbandos now.
I'm smiles. :-D