>>53931526finished reading that one, was pure kino.
Ross crying got me emotional, especially with the music links you included. But then Elm came along and it was the most pure and honest talk I read, loved it. The dialog was well written in that part.I love when Ross is happy in your stories. Quote from shopping 2 that stuck with me :
>Before I knew what I was doing, I'd started sprinting along after him, enjoying the feeling of the wind rushing past me. I was feeling something I'd not felt in a long time, a feeling I'd missed so dearly.>I was having fun.:>
