I regret building up this big backlog of stories. I need to start chipping away at it, so I looked at two of them and collected my thoughts.
>Skorupi-anon's "Sidequest: Journey to the Luminous Spring!">https://rentry.org/22agiPretty good, though it was silly. Not the biggest fan of overly silly stories, and I was a little disappointed when
the haunted house was just a joke instead of a real threat, but I think this was written well overall. You're good at presenting Furret's annoying amounts of energy, as well as Smith's exhaustion. Also, it was cool to see a Kaiji/Kris cameo here. And it's even cooler to see you writing again after your hiatus. You're a good writer, so I'm glad you came back, and I wish you luck on your next story.
>Spinarak-anon's "Rasmus and the Riddle of the Coral Monument">https://rentry.org/surknWell... that was kinda gross. Decently written story though, and it conveys Rasmus' personality well. One issue is the opening doesn't really clarify the location or the characters, making it somewhat disorienting and confusing, but not as bad as it could be.
>>54659406>>54659844>>54662826Thank you, glad you like it.
And yes, the name was a reference to Texas Red, but his personality/backstory is different.
>>54665757Never seen Adventure Time, but it's a cute outfit.
>>54672190PMD Pokemon can probably do it. I don't think we've seen any vehicles in the games, though I imagine they already have boats.
>>54672429I'd probably like it more, honestly. I don't hate open world games, and I've never been a big fan of PMD's gameplay, so I'd probably enjoy it if they changed it up like that.