>>54850395Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it!
And I'm glad I could finish it without being (too) late>Duskull can only learn Dream Eater with a TM or move tutorHe, uh... learned it in a dream, yeah!
>But what he did to Gus was unforgivable! Poor guy...He was just upholding the laws of the universe, which state that
Gus is not allowed to have a partner, even in dreams. :)
>The ending had some missed potentialYeah, there was a lot I could have done with it, but I didn't want the Halloween story to become a Christmas story lol.
Also, I liked the idea of
Cynda accidentally being the hero and saving the guild from having any causalities, and I didn't want to expand much into
corrupted Elm because I'm not considering bringing it back in the future. And if Elm had
done actual damage I feel like I would've had to write a scene with him coming to terms with what he did and being afraid of himself. And that would have detracted from my goal with the story.
Speaking of detracting,
the Toge nightmare was much edgier when I first wrote it, but I changed it out of the same worry of detracting too much. 