>>53969430Good stuff, i think you did a good job portraying everyone's characters, and its always nice to see Chespin and Wooper interact with them.
I liked the scene at the ice cream parlor a lot, the mental image of team cozy sharing an ice cream is awesome. The dungeon adventure was pretty short but i think it was good still. And it's interesting that team cozy knows Kiyo's secret now, i wanna see where that ends up going.Overall a nice little short story, im excited for part 2. I hope chespin gets over his fears soon, he doesn't deserve to be so stressed
