Thanks for all the feedback guys, I appreciate it and try to improve!
>>53381485Didn't expect anyone to get the reference lmao>I like the extra bit of detail towards the end with the Silver Spike, I feel like that would be something anon-mons would do, to use moves in combination with items, the environment, etc to boost their attackI'm a sucker on those types of combat, always wanted to write that bit.>>53381527Thanks! The questions I left open kinda works like a framework on what the overall story is gonna be (unless rewrite is required, which I don't mind.)
>>53381621>>53381682Thanks for the feedback! Please tell me which parts I need to improve on. I'm only good at the concept aspects but not so much on actually conveying my wild imagination into words.
>>53381649>>53381665Sorry, it kept flagging the post as spam so I thought of that way around.
>>53381753I'll try to improve!
>>53381755Thanks for the feedback, I was just laying frameworks on this one so I actually have no idea what he means by this lol. Though the risk is I might forget and leaving some ideas unused. Take your time on writing, there's no need to rush~
>>53381759Just tell us your mon and maybe a bit of background and your role. (unless you want to pay the application fee)
>>53381079(Were you the Mareep or is that completely separate member? Need to update the member list.)