Delivering the wholesome/lewd Juliana/Kieran fic I kinda-sorta-but-not-really promised in these threads. Apologies for being so very fucking late but trying to do something well enough takes time!
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/113379794 is still my favourite Kiki fan art and it was my inspiration, so... happy Halloween I guess.
A few things:
>I haven't played the game, so if I he ends up being a bit OOC, it's because of that. Although it'd be a tremendous failing on my part anyway, so if there are inaccuracies, please point them out>Writing self-insert blank slates and characters who are not my own is not my thing normally. I attempted to capture some sort of personality with Juliana that could match Kieran's apparent obsessiveness in equal footing instead. However, she doesn't get a physical description and the evolution of the Applin Kieran trades her is not mentioned for self-inserting purposes. My money's on Hydrapple though>I think second-person narration is asinine as fuck. No, really, I hate it, no offense or disrespect meant if it's what you prefer. The content of a fic written like that has to be very well worth it for me to come back and read it again. I'm not assuming anyone wants to be told how to think and what to feel, or that the content is necessarily worth it, so first-person narration is what you get!>I'm aware Juliana's narration sounds a bit too adult-like for typical protagonist age>It ended up being much more intense than expected, probably. The mouth obsession is strong in this one>If you think my writing is shit just tell me, writing is and will always be just a hobby for me but I'd like to actually get good>I swear I used to know how paragraphs are s'posed to work but somehow forgot>Sorry for defaulting to Japanese names>I just really fucking wanna dote on him so fucking bad, fuck manLink:
https://pastebin.com/rgvzzbbeEnjoy... or don't. Let me know anyway.
