For bump's sake.
My revision of my Dawn story so-far (NSFW, contains Pokephilia)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/20759141/chapters/49326857And the original 3 chapters so far, for comparison's sake. Chapter 3 is 100% different than the original, as will be 4, because I hate them so much.
1 -
https://pastebin.com/s6SXPZJ72 -
https://pastebin.com/Bgf6jA5j3 -
https://pastebin.com/FxgdHK2GI don't know what the fuck I was thinking with chapter 3's original version. It's full of grammatical errors, a meme for some reason, and is wildly different than the chapters before it, as if it was a different story entirely.
