>>46074695>Favorite/least favorite partAlready answered!
>Favorite Dawn sprite?The lewd ones are too obvious, so I choose this one! Or at least the way you use it, since by itself, I don't like how it looks more like she's scared rather than enthusiastic. I made this quick edit to try make her look a bit happier, while keeping the slight scary vibe the MC probably feels from her expression. I'd say I can do a decent job editing pics, so if you ever need any help, I could hit you up on Twitter!
>Are there any parts you think could have used a full art panel?The part in where they are training together, or when they are having breakfast seem like good candidates.
Also the pre/post sex part>Did you go back and try routes that you didn't do the first time around?Yep, I tried to do everything I could, and it was honestly real fun. I loved how the VN remembers some choices, like when you say you want to see her in a dress/swimsuit
>Any choices/options you think should be there but wasn't?Maybe some in where you can make some advances with her, like hugging her, or sneaking your arm around her shoulders?
>What'd you think of the lewdness? I'm confident in most of my writing but I've never written lewdness before.Pretty good, not gonna lie. Maybe you could get a bit more descriptive, but what's there is good enough.
>>46074737Yeah, I feel there could be more things the MC could do at night, even if it's just thinking about the day, or what could he do next. And yes! the dream bits were really fun! Scyther's already perfect, so I don't think he can be improved even more.
You can always try to combine them, but yeah even if it's just actually showing the naughty bits, that's already a bigger reward for the lewder readers. The stats could be fun, actually, I've seen them on VNs like Summertime Saga, or Insexual Awakening. I'd say those are more on the VN side, but I've never experienced a dating sim, so I can't say for sure
