>>46915902Awesome as always! I don't really have much to say that I haven't said before, just a few little suggestions. First, maybe add a little screen with text after each day ends? Like just use the days of the week, or keep it ambiguous and use Day 1, Day 2, etc. to make the transitions between days less abrupt. I'd say that in that screen you could put other things like stats (I think you mentioned wanting to add them somewhere some time ago, but I'm not sure) or money, or maybe an indicator of how well you're doing with Dawn, but I don't know how you feel about that.
And second, a little up/down animation for the screen when you're having sex with Dawn, as well as some squeaky bed, and sex noises. I'm sure this is possible in ren'py, though I don't know if it's hard to do
also, a scene in where they get stuck in the elevator, and end up having sex there could be fun, hahaAnd that's all. Maybe if you don't use this for this VN, perhaps you could in another one if you make more. And by the way, thanks for being based as fuck, VNAnon!