>>28481021I hope your still around.
I'm goin to warn you I'm not a writer so I don't know if I should be trusted but I liked it. It was a really fun read cute and a little "sexy" at the same time. I like roselia's personality childish but still mature-like. My only complain would be to maybe go more into detail and we never saw what roselia did in the contest but still I really enjoyed reading it and I hope the other writers will read and give a better critic. I hope to see more of your stuff in the future. If you ever need more ideas I could give you somme request I had in mind.