>>55918152Nice. Good story. Not long enough. My planefag hunger has been slightly quenched.
Unfortunately, I probably won't read your other stuff as I'm not too big on the anime. I'll still bookmark it in case I somehow get the urge.
My only gripe is that you use too many speech tags and interjections. In a story like this where it is super easy to tell who is talking (one is italicized, one is not), speech tags are a lot less necessary. Felt like I was driving on a dirt road.
Otherwise, very enjoyable. Keep up the good work, and be sure to post here if you ever write more planes.
