So I finally finished the first draft of that Typhlosion fantasy someone on /vp/ had. I left some of my notes in there, just because I felt like it. Please tear it apart, but keep in mind it was a first draft I did mostly in the last hour.
http://pastebin.com/9pw66F5sFeel free to ask me any questions.
What I'm impressed with is the fact that I wrote it without a single line of dialogue. Not too hard, but it's interesting.
