Anonymous
>the half blood jester >jester
Nate !PM597lkh2g
Last fic died because no one bumped it. I know because I was the last person to post in it.>Directed by pure hate-lust, One's hands have snuck their way up Hugh's jacket and shirt, searching for the boy's nipples.
Anonymous
>>11659272 >hating on jesters Faggot.
Anonymous
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>>11659356 >liking jesters No, you're the faggot here. Kill yourself.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11659272 >implying I'll ever be good enough to be a prince I'm more of a fool anyway.
>>11659317 Did you already close it? If not, can you like copy and pastebin it for me,
pretty please
with a cherry on top. Anonymous
Making a story set in medieval times and Pokemon are worshipped as gods. Red and white spherical crystals allow humans to gain the blessings of Pokemon.
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
>They cause a localized storm >Use them to show progression >It died >http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2873615/Darugeon Why. He's a decent smut writer, but he has what is quite possibly the worst Fakemon ever.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11659398 Write your fic and come back to it in a day or so to edit and revise it.
Make sure you don't have blatently heinious spelling errors and mistakes that will otherwise kick the reader out of a good story.
One scholar says that the mark of a good work is the ability to take any piece of it and be able to gleam many meanings from it. It's kinda hard to give all encompassing advice like this. Do you mind critique if you post your story?
Unless you don't have it written yet, which is fine too. Anonymous
>>11659523 I actually haven't written it yet.
Still stuck on many aspects of the story (economy of the world, main character, etc.)
Ill post the story when its done.
Anyway, do you think the main concept is good enough? I've heard people say its similar to the Pokemon ReBurst manga.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11659461 That fakemon is almost equivelent to autism.
>no smut of the fakemon? >so dissapoint >>11659562 The main concept sounds awesome? An important question to note in medival times is that animals were very important to economies and farming, so how will you make up for that?
Nate !PM597lkh2g
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>>11659371 Closed it hours ago.
After I wrap this story up I'm going to hit the hay, maybe do a quick CYOA one-shot on
/v/. Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
>>11659694 He's actually a pretty decent writer. I just wish his autism levels were >9000.
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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>>11659819 Oh shit, that's greater than, not less than. Anonymous
>9/14 posts are tripfags >tripfag general
Anonymous
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>>11659843 >BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH TRIPFAGS ARE BAD THEY'RE IN MY CLUB Jesus fuck, I'm anonymous, hate tripfags, yet even I think you're retarded.
Anonymous
>>11659317 >my story idea was the lucky winner It's happening
I wonder where this will go Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>11659988 It's okay if I refer to each member as "One", "Two", and "Three", is it? I thought it would be confusing if I just said "This member", "That member" etc. etc.
Kind of like twisted Dr. Seuss-shit Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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>>11659843 >Complaining about tripfags in an art thread writing is one of the arts, before anyone says anything Anonymous
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>>11660165 That's okay.
In hindsight, my mind is conflicted on whether Hugh should have won or lost in the battles, whichever works better at setting up the next part. Anonymous
Nate !PM597lkh2g
Oh dear god what am I doing I haven't written stuff this gritty since...nevermind. Just...here it is. I hope it pleases the requester. http://pastebin.com/sgknEz9Z Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>11659562 >Anyway, do you think the main concept is good enough? I've heard people say its similar to the Pokemon ReBurst manga. Well, that depends. Could you clarify a bit further what you mean exactly by "the blessings of Pokemon?" In ReBURST the crystals literally turned their users into fusions with their Pokemon, so if you're not doing that, the idea of using a crystal would be the only similarity.
Anonymous
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>>11663290 I'm not the requester, but I enjoyed it, I thought it was well-written Anonymous
>>11663290 Requester here, and let me just say:
I am very pleased with how it came out, the combination of danger and sexy created a unique and intriguing flavor.
The use of present tense throughout surprised me, but I've always been biased towards past tense during the course of stories.
All in all, my expectations were exceeded quite nicely, and I must thank you for this.
If I may ask,
what made my idea appeal enough for you to run with it? Nate !PM597lkh2g
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>>11663908 Honestly?
Was the first time I ever legitimately wrote lewd shit with more than two people. Anonymous
>>11659221 >How does Rain Dance, Sunny Day, Sandstorm and Hail work? The same way they work in the anime. Stop thinking too hard.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>Current ToT: How does Rain Dance, Sunny Day, Sandstorm and Hail work?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>11664398 Wouldn't that make them OP if they could strike in 1/5 second?
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
Anonymous
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>>11664345 alt-130 to do the é thing.
Anonymous
Nate !PM597lkh2g
Those Little Things About Fanfiction... Nate !PM597lkh2g Fri 15 Mar 2013 01:08:19 No. 11671496 Report Get ready, here it comes.>The protagonists are TWINS! Huh? They don't look alike? Different hair color? Who cares, THEY'RE TWINS! >GUISE GUISE TAKE THE POKEMON CHARACTERS- BUT BUT LIKE, THEY GO TO HIGH SCHOOL NOW~ >EVERYONE'S POKEMON CAN TALK WITH AURA >My starter isn't a starter Pokemon! >All battles last five sentences or less >ASH'S POV --> Five sentences about the scenery --> GARY'S POV --> Three sentences about my irrelevant thoughts --> MISTY'S POV >First-fucking-person view in general if it isn't done right >Everything is dark and gritty in my alternate universe >the BLUENETTE >Remember, if you can't think of a good joke, you can always make fun of Justin Bieber or Twilight. >The rival and the girl protagonist must always be butt-fucking, no exceptions, this is the CANON top tier ship whether you like it or not. You are the unwanted son of the devil if you don't ship it, you dirty backwater rat. >"Use Thunderbolt!" he said as Pikachu used Thunderbolt. >Don't like, don't read ;) >"Dialogue is written as..." >"You wouldn't capitalize mouse.." >Rated T for a mild cuss word! >Hugh's little sister doesn't have a name. HEY! LET'S GIVE HER ONE!~ >I'm sorry my summary sux ;'( >Joke fics that get taken seriously >Using [blank]-kun and [blank]-chan un-ironically >The author's note consists of the author TALKING with the characters in her story >EVERY STORY ENDS WITH A KISS >People who expect all of their reviews to be blatant cock-sucking >Constructive criticism = FLAMES!!!!111 >Q&A stories (Bonus points if it's "Ask [shipname]!" >Truth or Dare with [x] characters! >"Chatroom" stories >Stories written in script format >Stories with emoticons, or "LOL" "ROFL" >MY STORY IS JUST ME RE-WRITING THE GAME'S PLOT!~ >I hate Valentine's Day because the character I'm shipped with in the story does not return feelings >hurr shippy scene >HORPA DORPA DURRRH HURRR DURRR UHRRFHF GUESS VALENTINE'S DAY ISN'T SO BAD AFTER ALL
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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>>11671496 I nearly threwup reading this.
Anonymous
>>11671496 What am I reading, I got lost on the second line.
Anonymous
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>>11671496 >Hugh's little sister doesn't have a name. HEY! LET'S GIVE HER ONE!~ That gives me a wicked idea... but I'll keep that a secret.
Anonymous
>>11671721 Stupid things people put in fanfiction.
And he's right about each and everyone of them.
Anonymous
>>11671742 Good god, who writes these things?
Anonymous
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>>11671496 dear mother of god
Anonymous
I'm about to set to work on my fic, but I'm having trouble thinking of a solid, hooking intro into the story. Would anyone be willing to give advice on the do's and don'ts?
Anonymous
>>11671756 Weeabos, self-projectors and 14 year olds.
Anonymous
>>11671496 I agree with you on most points except:
>Twins must be half-identical No, fraternal twins can look completely different from each other as they are two different eggs. My younger sister and I look as different as X and Y, really. Blood relatives don't always look obviously alike.
>My starter isn't a starter! Depends, but there are plenty of trainers that didn't have the usual starters; Hugh's sis, Lyra/Gold if you picked the opposite gender, etc, Michael, Red in Yellow, etc.
>"Dialogue is written as …" What do you mean here?
>Hugh's little sister doesn't have a name! LET'S GIVE HER ONE! Nothing wrong with naming characters if it is necessary. Not necessary if she's just mentioned in a passing reference but if she's recurring she should probably have a name. Same applies for surnames if it's necessary (character needs to address relative of character as Mr or Ms, or similar). Muh canon lack of name is really autistic in my opinion.
Everything else you wrote seems reasonable, though.
Anonymous
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>>11671821 Have dawn buttfuck iris
Anonymous
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>>11671825 Sounds about right.
Anonymous
>>11671496 >bluenette so much hate.
>you wouldn't capitalize a bear i love those reviews tho.
Anonymous
Came here looking for a specific fic I read last week. It was in the Pastebin... There also seems to be a lot of links not posted in that one...
Anonymous
>>11671496 >The protagonists are TWINS! Huh? They don't look alike? Different hair color? Who cares, THEY'RE TWINS! That's kind of dumb, but fraternal twins are a thing.
>My starter isn't a starter Pokemon! This actually makes more sense in my eyes, because starter pokemon seem like they should be rarer and that everyone should'nt have one.
>Using [blank]-kun and [blank]-chan un-ironically This one is iffy, because a story specifically set in Japan could get away with it, really, and to be honest you can't always convey the translation well. It has to be done correctly though (ie. no referring to adults that are supposed to be respected as "chan"). I would never use them myself, either way though.
>Hugh's little sister doesn't have a name. HEY! LET'S GIVE HER ONE!~ To be honest naming characters who aren't already isn't that big a deal, especially if they have a major role in the story.
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>11671838 >Twins must be half-identical I can understand that, but when the games themselves make it clear that the characters are not of relation, whether it be subtly or not, is what I was getting at. It's like saying that you're suddenly my uncle, just because the author says so.
>My starter isn't a starter! I understand, but this gets taken to the extreme more often than you think. Which is why it's my pet peeve.
>"Dialogue is written as …" Look up Farla and you'll get that one. That's also where I got "You wouldn't capitalize mouse.." etc.
>Hugh's little sister doesn't have a name! LET'S GIVE HER ONE! I'm not that mad about this point. It's just that when authors don't make it clear that they've given her a name in say, author's notes. It causes confusion when a character you -know- does not exist in the game begins talking.
>>11671917 See previous reply for twin statement.
>My starter isn't a starter Pokemon! I suppose it can make sense if the MC is in a region/town that lacks a professor, but I've just seen it so much, I swear if another Mary Sue gets an Eevee, like holy shit.
>Using [blank]-kun and [blank]-chan un-ironically It can get away with it. But for stories like Pokemon, the regions sans Unova take after Japan but they aren't -really- Japan, if you get what I mean.
See previous reply for Hugh's sister ordeal.
Anonymous
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>>11671908 Uh, can you provide any details? You're being way too vague.
Anonymous
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>>11671903 I'm guessing by bluenette they don't mean dawn.
Anonymous
>>11671933 I can understand the problem with twin thing and naming characters issues, in those case.
>Eevee Yeah, that really goes along with traditional starters as far as rarity, really.
I'm talking more about people getting more common things. Someone getting a Croagunk as a starter in Sinnoh would be more along the lines of what I mean.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11671496 >My starter isn't a starter Pokemon! Meh, its more like:
>My starter is an OP'd legendary! There's no problem with having a baltoy as a starter, especially if the character lives where they live. I think of it as pokemon handed down by parents as they decide to let their kids go on a pokemon adventure.
Or they get lucky and catch one on the first route.
Don't hate on my unnatural hair colors... >"Use Thunderbolt!" he said as Pikachu used Thunderbolt. This is exactly the thing I'm trying to avoid.Boring ass battles. >People who expect all of their reviews to be blatant cock-sucking >Constructive criticism = FLAMES!!!!111 The reviews are fucking useless on
FF.net : this should be a motto.
>>11671821 Are you the one who was doing the one with the crystals?
Good overused rules of thumb for intros: Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>11671999 >>11672009 >Croagunk >Baltoy Now these I can be more lenient with. Croagunk is obscure to most fanfiction and you wouldn't really expect someone to get him.
But now, if you have a Mary Sue getting an Eevee or a Vulpix as their starter, that's a whole damn different story. And it's what I was mainly referring to.
Anonymous
>>11672021 But eevee is technically an starter
Anonymous
>>11671933 >Twins Oh, I get what you mean. I thought your gripe was "They don't look alike!!1", not "They aren't related."
>Starter Do you mean stuff like people are starting Rosa with a Chandy or Haxorus or something overpowered?
>Dialogue You mean people sending reviews about how to format dialogue? What's exactly the issue with that? It annoys the piss out of me when people don't use commas, double apostrophes, appropriate line breaks, punctuation in general, etc. It makes it really difficult to read otherwise. What specifically is the issue?
>Name Okay, I see. You should've been more clear on that. You mean when like Hugh's sister is suddenly Daisy and she's never referred to as "Hey Hugh, there's your sis! Hey! Daisy!" or any obvious tip-offs? Because yeah, that's really teeth-grindingly annoying. In my opinion the A/N is not a place for exposition and giving out plot details, etc in them is 2meta4me.
Anonymous
>>11672021 Eevee and Vulpix are valid starters; things like Tyranitar and Reuniclus are not.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11672021 Ah, I see.
What's really intresting is eevee is almost always given midgame with the exception of Pokemon Collusium and XD: Gale of Darkness where you are either given the two most obscure eeveelutions or just plain eevee itself and told to evolve it.
I see the rest of your points.
Do you have a link for your latest CYOA? I accidently fucked up and closed out your last thread which is 404'd Also, you forgot one:
>Ralts >>11672046 In only one game. See my above comment.
Just cause it can evolve into several different types doesn't make it a starter.
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>11672046 I know, my point is that it's been overdone.
>>11672053 Yeah, that's what I meant.
>Starter Not necessarily, but that can work too. If a trainer starters out with a legendary or an over-powered Pokemon, than that's a problem right off the bat. My main issue was characters, most often Mary Sues, not receiving starter Pokemon and instead getting Pokemon like Eevee. While Eevee is a starter in itself, the idea here is that it's been overdone.
>Dialogue Look up Farla and read her reviews. Dragon Quill at blogspot. The issue is that her reviews seem like copypastas that she forces herself to comb through rather than actually helping the reader.
>Name Yeah, without a tip-off, it can get kind of annoying.
>>11672087 http://pastebin.com/BLXwfMb0
>>11672087 Canonically, getting any starter is rare.
By the time of B2W2, it's started to get much better, but before that you lived near a Professor or you didn't get one of them.
Anonymous
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>>11672087 You should add the points Nate made to the pastebin, although maybe you should clean them up a bit with the clarifications we made afterward.
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>>11672101 >Starter Oh, I suppose Eevee is a bit overdone, as much as actually like the little bastard. I've sort of always wanted to see the protagonist be influenced/somewhat alike to whatever they start with, especially after seeing that based image of Rosa using an all ghost team (don't have it on me at the moment). Her posture and expression were really unique, powerful and striking. It was an interesting approach of that character I've never seen tried elsewhere, and I want to see something more like that in writing, not necessarily with Ghost pokes but a different way of looking at a character.
Rosa+based Litwick forever >Dialogue Oh, I gotcha. More of the "lel mechanics lesson" without discussing the story. I think if it is eye bleedingly difficult to read because something like different speakers in the same paragraph with little/no intermediating text (I've seen it and it is horrifying), then something obviously needs to be said, but some review of the plot needs to be addressed as well, unless the story is literally incomprehensible due to formatting.
Anonymous
>>11672083 >>11672046 Either of those are valid starters for sure. Though from the anime/games Eevees are more of a "rich person" Pokemon. The only time you can actually catch them is when they're imported into the Trophy Garden in Sinnoh (atleast in the main games). So if you're writing a character who has an Eevee as a starter you'd have to come up with a good reason they have one.
Anonymous
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>>11672009 No, I'm a different person.
Thanks for your input, though, it helps - thought my post would go ignored completely!
Chandelure
>>11671496 I guess the points people were unclear should probably be written as
>Protagonists are twins! What? They're both only children? And it's explicitly stated they aren't? Who cares, TWINS! >My starter is a OP'd legendary/powerful second stage evo/super rare Pokémon >Reviews of fics with bad mechanics must never talk about anything with grammar, ever >Hugh's little sis doesn't have a name. LET'S GIVE HER ONE AND FORGET TO INFORM THE READER WE DID! Also, can we add
>All female protagonists are super peppy all the time Christ I hate the lack of variety in girl protagonist characterizations between fics. Rosa managed to get some variation because she's multitalented but some of the others not so much.
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>11672592 Just remembered one. Let's also not forget:
>IT'S BETTER THAN IT SOUNDS Chandelure
>>11672600 Also
>using Japanese names for some characters but not for anything else Chandelure
>>11672632 Oh and
>Confusing 3deep5u introduction using several mythological references and vague references to fate and the state of humanity at large as if your fucking Pokémon fanfic is going to comment on that shit Or
>This fic is based on [insert piece of pretentious and/or highbrow piece of literature]. Plot proceeds to make no sense and the story is incomprehensible as the writer tries harder and harder to emulate Herman Ray George Melbradorxly, a respectable author. Anonymous
>>11672695 >Fanfic inserts lyrics to some song between paragraphs that are very loosely related to what's happening Nate !PM597lkh2g
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>>11672728 Oh god, this so hard.
Chandelure
>>11672728 >the word said must be evaded at all costs Chandelure
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>>11672600 >IT'S BETTER THAN IT SOUNDS >open it >mfw it's infinitely worse Anonymous
>>11672750 I had an English teacher in high school who once actually spent half of a class going on a rant about how she thought only or even mostly using "said" for dialogue was a sign of a bad writer.
Anonymous
>>11672939 Your teacher is retarded then, because the majority of speech tags in anything is "said" unless the author is an autist that thinks "called" and "stated" are better.
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>>11673082 I know that, I was just reminded of her. Even back then I thought she was being pretty silly.
Anonymous
>>11672939 >encouraging bookisms >teaching children butchildrenarethefuture.avi
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>>11673200 I once had to write a short story for an English class back in high school and every time I used 'be' or any form of it, I lost half a point. Well I guess description, passive voice and metaphors are invalid hurr durr.
Anonymous
TOTT: How would you guys go about writing a story where a form of hypnotism causes someone to love another? (In some cases, more than one pairing.) Like say, general hypnotism, a love potion, spell, or an arrow from a cherub?
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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>>11673334 You would have a sub-conflict where the other character is constantly worried the spell will wear off and the other character will start hating them, on the cusp of 2edgy4me and all that, as well as another sub-plot where the others would see and not understand why X character loves another, and eventually find out what's up.
Nate !PM597lkh2g
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>>11673334 Stop convincing me to write this. Anonymous
>>11673334 Does Stockholm Syndrome count as a form of hypnotism?
I'd done that in the past.
Anonymous
>>11674046 Unless the patient is manipulating, which isn't the case in Stockholm syndrome, no.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>11668410 That's effectively what it does in the games, just translated to a non-turn-based system. It's worked for me.
Anonymous
>>11673334 >a good percentage of fanfiction.net stories needs a good execution. the gimmick is obvious. is your story going to be serious or funny?
Anonymous
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>>11674628 There is no story, it's just a topic.
Anonymous
>>11674309 So then Lima Syndrome?
Anonymous
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>>11676269 That's just the same thing as Stockholm but reversed...
Anonymous
Run your fic through
wordle.net and post results.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>11677794 >>11677816 I have the strange feeling Roxie is involved.
Anonymous
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>>11677860 That's just absurd.
Anonymous
Can someone criticize my fic concept?
Anonymous
>>11677902 I dunno personally I think you might need more details. I could see it working as something silly, but I don't know if that's what you're going for. It seems a little too campy for something that's supposed to be truly serious, I think.
Anonymous
>>11677938 >I dunno personally I think you might need *to give more more details.
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>>11677902 You basically have two paths to choose from:
>a morbidly humorous story or
>a terrifying thriller Honestly, I don't have any qualms with your fic idea, it's really how you pull this idea off will determine your story.
It sounds a bit to cliche- another psychopath killerkilling dozens of people before either guilt weighs down on his shoulders or someone catches him, but if you execute it well that won't happen. Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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>>11672262 >The only time you can actually catch them is when they're imported into the Trophy Garden in Sinnoh (atleast in the main games) Do you even BW2?
Anonymous
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>>11672695 Now I want to see someone try to write The Sound and the Fury with pokemon. First chapter through the POV of a Slowbro.
Also:
>Crossover fic which is literally the source material with the name and setting replaced. Anonymous
Does anyone here know what ever happened to that guy who showed up months ago, who was writing both a long Pokémon fanfic an also writing a long non-Pokémon story? The non-Pokémon story was 920+ chapters with a word count over 27 million and still unfinished.
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>>11682427 Don't know. I have him mentioned in the pastebin though.
Speaking on which, will finally be done over the weekend.
Nate !PM597lkh2g
So what work did you guys get done today regarding your forever hiatus fic?>he knows Just kidding, it's not me you silly gooses, my dad is dead! ;_;
Anonymous
Anyone have a link to the pastebin?
Anonymous
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>>11682541 Haven't gotten any work done all week.
Dunno if it's 'cause I just went off my meds or if I'm just a lazy bastard Probably the latter.
Anonymous
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>>11682559 I do not. We might just have to wait until HBJ finishes the updates, or something.
Anonymous
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>>11682541 that is the sweetest note ever
Anonymous
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>>11682541 This note is fake as fuck
Anonymous
So anybody know how to fast forward from one scene to another...For example a bar to a house?
Anonymous
>>11682810 What do you mean? Like a simple scene transition? It shouldn't be too hard...what's the situation?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>11682884 I mean after a date, 2 people go back to their place. Nothing interesting happens in between, So we transition the scene from leaving the bar to entering to home. I feel it's too script-like to put "later at the house" in a fanfiction.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>11682947 Eh, not really. You could do something as simple as "they left the bar together, and when they got to the house..." or some variation thereof. It is not only acceptable but highly encouraged to cut out periods of irrelevant time as succinctly as possible.
Anonymous
Venonat story guy back and I've improved it.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
>>11683011 We're getting closer, now can that be worked into a first person narrative?
Anonymous
>>11683038 "we left the bar together, and when we got back to the house..."
Simple, really. Think how you would tell a story in real life to your friend, how you make those transitions. It should flow pretty naturally.
>>11683036 Horizontal rules are there for a reason...wait, can pastebin even support those?
Well at least this discussion has gotten me back on writing that fic that should have been done two weeks ago...
Anonymous
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>>11683093 Thanks for the advice, will post fic in later threads!
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>Stories with transitions that are literally "2 HOURS LATER" in bold text, and not aligned to center
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>11683021 This sounds good only if it doesn't take itself seriously, and judging by the synopsis it doesn't.
Anonymous
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>>11683161 >Using such ellipses, no intro sentence No professional writer would escape with that.
Anonymous
>>11683161 You're spending too much time describing common flaws inside the thread. Do a proper pastebin or something. You'll have the place to explicit your thoughts, explain what you mean, be useful, and I won't have to scroll down through your greentexting in order to read the more relevant posts.
Anonymous
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>>11683021 Sounds a bit cliché. That would need some seriously good execution to be successful.
>>11682947 Change paragraph, use an ellipsis. Last sentence of previous paragraph needs to imply they left. Better if through a line of dialogue rather than a purely narrative transition.
Anonymous
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>>11686951 I think you're reading a bit too into that.
Anonymous
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>>11671496 >The rival and the girl protagonist must always be butt-fucking, no exceptions, this is the CANON top tier ship whether you like it or not. You are the unwanted son of the devil if you don't ship it, you dirty backwater rat. Anonymous
Anonymous
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I won't be releasing updates of this story anymore. I'll still be working on it and release the full version when I'm done. I seriously need to finish this.
Anonymous
>>11689004 What does this have to do with po... oh, we have to put pokemon words in there, don't we?
I didn't. Have fun with reading what I got. It's what I do every time I get a "fill in the blanks" story.
>http://pastebin.com/nRmBuRXv Anonymous
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>>11689945 it's so disgusting and immature but my sides
Anonymous
Does anyone know if Pokémaster G. is still in here? He said last thread he was gonna do Iris x Charizard and then he left.
>>11695042 He's usually lurking. When he's awake and not busy.
I am always lurking, under the same conditions.
Questy !!U9LOyjIvM/v
Been lurking this thread. Kyouhei's story is 7/10 could be better tier.
>>11695042 >>11695211 I am also always here.
Watching.
Waiting.
Commiserating. Anonymous
>>11695256 >Blink-182 Did you just come from /mu/?
Anonymous
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>>11695271 I haven't regularly visited /mu/ in two or so years,
I just occasionally listen to old Blink for nostalgia.
Anonymous
>>11695241 Did you at least get a boner from the Hugh porn?
Questy !!U9LOyjIvM/v
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>>11695427 If it matters,
only a little .
Anonymous
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Bump or something.
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
>A wild FFG appeared! >Fight/Bag/Pi kmi n/run >Fight >Bamp/Shitpost/Circlejerk/Actually have on-topic discussion (out of PP) >Bamp >Cake used Bamp! >It's Super Effective!
Anonymous
>>11699702 Bag > Medicine > Max Elixir > Use >Pokémon >Cake
Anon-kun used Max Elixir. The PP of all of Cake's moves have been restored.
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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>>11699963 Th-thanks anon-kun...
Anonymous
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11677794 Bumping with my story in Wordle.
Anonymous
>>11705061 >Hanako Are you doing a PokemonxKatawa Shoujo crossover?
You stole my idea Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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Next update will have the group encountering a very timid Flareon that seems to like Tomas and won’t leave him alone. They also choose their next mission, and stock up on weaponry. The Mudkip tries to get him to do her when he’s trying to sleep that night.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11705103 That's from Katawa Shoujo? Didn't know, never played it.
Anonymous
Two-face burn vic chick's name is Hanako.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>11699702 >On topic discussion Well I wouldn't mind some pokemon ghost stories. Don't literally have to be about ghost pokemon.
Haven't written shit... Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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>>11705911 Is that so? I may have her take the same damage from the fight at the end of the story. Wait and see!
Anonymous
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>>11689004 The Adventure Of The Nidoran
Jeezy and Sara were out for a Confused Valentine's walk in the gutter. As they went, Sara rested her hand on Jeezy's Finger. It was the most romantic walk ever. But even though the day was so Black, Jeezy was filled with Real dread.
"Do you suppose it's Intelligent here?" he asked Humorously.
"You Selfish silly," Sara said, tickling Jeezy with her Muk. "It's completely Short."
Just then, a Short Tempered Nidoran leapt out from behind a Pokeball and Pulled Sara in the Back. "Aaargh!" Sara screamed.
Things looked Funny. But Jeezy, although he was Decent, knew he had to save his love. He grabbed a Scrafty and, like a light skinned nigga bleeding gutter rainbows into on to the pavement, beat the Nidoran Angrily until it ran off. "That will teach you to Pull innocent people."
Then he clasped Sara close. Sara was bleeding whole heartily. "My darling," Jeezy said, and pressed his lips to Sara's Head.
"I love you," Sara said Lately, and expired in Jeezy's arms.
Jeezy never loved again.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11708877 Wait, am I derailing the thread?
Anonymous
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>>11709864 ↑ means "up". It was a bump.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>11705911 Hanako is also the Japanese name of Ash's mother...
Anonymous
>>11713038 Ahaha and so I have the perfect jumping off point for my crossover fic
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>11713907 Glad to have helped.
Anonymous
>>11714754 You sir, have succeeded in making me feel like shit with your picture.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>11715047 I owe you an apology. It's what I get for not looking at what I post before I do it - I thought it was the one where she's smiling.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
I'm pretty okay at what I do. I like what I do, even. Even if others don't.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11716880 So are you working on Iris x Charizard still?
>You're pretty goddamn great. Thanks.
Anonymous
>>11716880 Are you the guy working on NEPR?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
Anyone want me to pastebin the next chapter of The Human Species? I probably won't upload it anywhere else for a few days, so you guys will be the first to read it.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>11717113 Still Dragonite. Charizard comes next.
Then Bianca x Sawk & Throh
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11718925 Okay. Let's see it.
Anonymous
>>11718527 Never Ending Pokemon Romance.
Anonymous
>>11719115 Alright, here you go. Haven't thought of a chapter title yet, but something along the lines of ADJECTIVE NOUN MEW is to be expected.
Virtuous Legendary Mew?
http://pastebin.com/rGAmbNSA Anonymous
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>>11719556 I thought he said that would never be finished if people didn't keep PMing him requests.
Anonymous
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If you can read this, 10/10 to you.
>>11719753 SG93IGhhcmQgaXMgaXQgdG8gZ29vZ2xlICJoZXggdG8gYXNjaWkvdGV4dCI/IEtub3dpbmcgaXQgaXMgaGV4IGlzbid0IGhhcmQgZWl0aGVyLg==
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>>11719753 53 68 61 64 65 64 20 53 6b 69 65 73
>>11719793 Keeps out the casuals and bots, I guess? Still, kind of redundant.
Anonymous
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>>11707057 No one?
Guess i'll have to write 'em myself, if I can come up with any good ideas. Never did horror before.
Anonymous
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It was a dusky morning.
Anonymous
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Upon entering, she was overwhelmed by the stench of blood. A sense of dread filled her entire body.
Anonymous
"Well", he said, "he certainly didn't TASTE good, that's for sure!"
Anonymous
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>>11724064 D-Dumping f-fics p-police...
Anonymous
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>>11719556 No, that one's WAYYYYY better than me.
Anonymous
I just want to read a dope long trainerfic that isn't faggy or le edgy or has the perfect mc that loves his pokemon no matter what all the time etc ;-;
Anonymous
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>>11724064 ... please, stop. Fuckin' fanfics...
Anonymous
>>11725278 I think what you're looking for is pretty much impossible, bro.
In all seriousness, the idea of writing a trainer fic pops into my head every now and again, but I know that no matter what I write it'll just end up a generic and overdone idea anyway.
I am rather fond of the MC I came up with for it though, which really is the only thing that keeps me from completely shelving the idea.
Also I could do something like the anime and have traveling companions. Sending my steel donut around Unova with Nate and Roxie keeping him company sounds like it could be a dream.
I have so much other work though, so in the end I really don't have the time to write a really long extended fanfic, even if I wanted to, which is the nail in the coffin for this idea.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>11726661 http://pastebin.com/fepk9AK7 I forgot Emboar was male halfway through and had to make some quick half-assed edits about it being fat. Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>11726932 Fuck, ignore that, had to fix some shit.
http://pastebin.com/7wg0iLN0 Anonymous
Anonymous
>>11716880 Hello Sir, What's up with dat Iris and Unova Female Gym Leaders Orgy?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
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>>11725670 ;-;
It doesn't even have to be about battling gym leaders or trying to fight the pokemon league honestly, it could be just travelling from region to region with your companions and pokemon
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>11725670 I don't know, I wouldn't say it's impossible. Just unlikely, because the length of a full trainer fic leaves a lot of potential traps to step in.
Anonymous
>>11726961 Oh man.. you just give me a second cliffhanger boner (the first one was the Iris Lesbian Orgy) I know you are working on it, but if you' are going to post a story, tell us if it's a WIP.
About that story... hnggggg... Bel's Muscle fetish was very strange, but it's actually pretty funny (she gets horny with strong arms... DUDE if she'd visit Jotho, she'll flood Chuck's Gym...) and the last Sawk reaction... I'm a little dissapointed but it's a smart twist... and Throh's uniform/skin... I like how you mind works.
Even if you make Bianca such a slutty muscle freak, I like her, a lot.
I hope you finish
Pokerangers, I don't lost anything for asking, the Iris one and this one soon.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>11732717 Bianca has a muscle fetish in the anime, and hangs all over Stephan's Sawk during the battle tournament mini-arcs.
Iris is WIP still, like this story.
Anonymous
>>11732871 Oh wow... I have a fuckton of episodes to watch... So, she is a pretty crazy gal... Thanks for the info
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>11733037 They don't come out and say she has a girlboner for muscles, she just gets all hyper around Pokemon and people with muscles.
Anonymous
>>11733044 /r/ing for someone to help me find that fic someone wrote, F/F Snivy/Emolga I think it was. "Three is a Bunch"? help.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>>11736447 Newest Nate and Rosa
Anonymous
>>11736447 Hate to be an impatient jackass but any word on the ETA of the new pastebin? I thought it was supposed to come on monday.
>>11739153 You aren't sounding like an impatient jackass. I never managed to finish it because I've either been so exausted in the middle of making it I fall asleep or I'm either too busy most days and send something from my phone.
I'm sorry for making promises I can't really keep, but these last few weeks have just been hell.
However, you could maybe find an unfinished version somewhere in this post. It works using the ctrl-F feature to find a genre, and later an author and a name. That way if people are looking for something to read they can find it easily. There may also be posts that I just copied and pasted in there so I know what to add. And maybe unnecessary texts. It's a hard goal to make it fully navigable and uncluttered. Also, any opinions on the
gen /vp project
>>11738629 or the VN project?
>>11715677 A completely impartial third party !msOUNdt4dI
A completely impartial third party !msOUNdt4dI Fri 22 Mar 2013 02:51:25 No. 11743625 Report >>11743446 I really have no opinion on gen /vp/ but the VN is pretty neat
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11743625 >A completely impartial third party >!msOUNdt4dl Dude. It's not like anyone here doesn't know your trip.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>11743790 It was a joke, bro.
If I really wanted to come off as a completely impartial third party I would have just gone anon.
And not used a Roxie pic.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>11743446 I'm really excited about the vn
Nate !PM597lkh2g
Heads up.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>11744951 Sounds neat, I'll have to check it out.
Anonymous
>>11745182 >Sounds neat >No info Good laugh.
Anonymous
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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[Clever comment for bump][/Clever comment for bump]
Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>11745927 Just the idea of the surprise.
Yeah, I'm bored.
Anonymous
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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#420BAMPITFAGGOT
Questy !!U9LOyjIvM/v
It's coming. Neo PokéQuest, the new CYOA from everyone's favorite drawfag, Questy!
Mystery Orange Guy
>>11671496 >Twins -What are fraternal twins. But I get what you mean.
>Starter isn't a starter Pokemon -What
>>11743446 What's the /vp/ project?
And I'm back. Hi, everyone.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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>>11759302 /vp/ is making a Pokémon VN and a game. The two are unrelated.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11759302 The one where a bunch of people try to make a /vp/ game and a ton of faggotry and drama occurs before they actually make it. It's pretty well along now, but I've been monitoring the threads and there was a lot of drama over surveys and stuff.
The Visual Novel is by completely different people and it's still getting off the ground, but looks promising and has promising people working on it.
And we need a ToT to jumpstart this thread.
What's your favorite pokemon? How do you feature him/her in fics? Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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Life is HARD, man.Waaah.
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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>>11759456 Lewd pic is lewd.
Mystery Orange Guy
>>11759456 I used to love Leafeon and Charizard, but I've never written them in my fics. Mainly because I have written like three Pokemon fics, the worst and longest one being about Pokemon Acanthite Pokemon.
You still doing those PMD CYOAs? Those were fun.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11759478 Meh, I'm itching to get to writing one but I have to get time cleared up to.
It's either going to be the one that failed last time, A macbeth/king lear-like mystery with Jigglypuff before he became the guild master or the Adventures of [/spoiler]Omigosh[/spoiler] Sunflora and
Tsundere Loudred.
Any feedback on which I should do? I don't really have a good grip on the entire plot
(That won't be exactly the same as the plot of the games) of the series, so I'm mostly doing prologues now.
And that's implying I can find time to finish the pastebin.
I like so many of the eeveelutions. Leafeon is another one on the top three.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>11759561 >I like so many of the eeveelutions. I must be the only person to think the Eevee line has been done to death time and again.
No offense to your likes, of course, just my opinion. I see them everywhere these days--them and Lucario. Lucario's kind of a given, but it seems to have spiked recently.
MysteryOrangeGuy
>>11759561 If you aren't completely adhering to the plot of the games, then you might want to take
OC . I don't know about doing Jigglypuff again, maybe do him at a later time. Did you do a Corphish story yet?
Shit, now I want to start a CYOA.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11759624 Actually it has- eevee and it's evolutions are very gimmicky at best, and their use in fics is only because they can change to identify with the writer so much. They are a dead horse.
Don't forget the infamous Gardevior as well.
That being said, I don't really favor espeon and umbreon, and I had to learn to respect glaceon and vaporeon before I would actually liked them. I have a list of my favorites somewhere, but Flareon's somewhere on the top ten.
>>11759671 >OC >Gasp I want the readers to have some investment in the main character.
Not yet. I can't think of something involving Corphish yet. If you have any ideas I'd be happy to hear them.
Mystery Orange Guy
>>11759730 Have you ever thought about doing a story with Grovyle and Celebi?
And not right off hand. Well, nothing good, anyway.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>11759730 >Gardevoir I can't say shit there, I spam Lopunny like nobody's business.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11759793 I have, but it would be later on. RIght now it's focusing on the guild members but I might do others later on.
I could write something up real quick if you'd like.
Mystery Orange Guy
>>11759881 It's up to you, man. I don't want to force it or rush you or anything. It seems like you're pretty busy as is.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
http://pastebin.com/zutM4Nph Bianca x Throh x Sawk Update. Not finished yet, but will be soon. Just being a whore for the sake of being a whore The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11759896 I'll see what I can do. Celebi and Grovyle, or did you want something else?
I'd like to do the Omigosh Sunflora and Tsundere Loudred soon, so I won't write that yet.
Mystery Orange Guy
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>>11759979 Only if you're not too busy, but I'm fine with anything.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11760510 We gots referenced guys! Wowie!
It's coming, Mystery Orange Guy.
Anonymous
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>>11759456 I make him the only pokemon actually able to accomplish anything ever in any scene where he's involved, even to the point where he's more competent that every human involved in the scene, regardless of how intelligent or competent any of the humans involved is supposed to be.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>11759302 >What Starter isn't from a recognized set of starter Pokemon, for example, starting with Marill.
Questy !!U9LOyjIvM/v
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>>11758917 New thread coming soon! I am hard at work on the potential storylines.
Anonymous
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>>11759456 Easy. Favourite Pokémon is a starter.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11760721 http://pastebin.com/EwtfPgPT No, it doesn't take me six hours to write a paragraph. Anonymous
>>11759935 Pretty funny and sexy from where you left off. Hungering for more.
I liked how you dealt with the issue of Throh's robes. Mystery Orange Guy
>>11762760 It's pretty good, HBJ. I like the interaction between Grovyle and Celebi, mainly the sighing.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>11762824 Thanks.
I was going to include their trainers too, but I really prefer just the Pokemon. The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11762867 They ship pretty well. Now, I need to think of a crazy idea for Tsundere Loudred and Omigosh Sunflora to do. Any suggestions? I might be able to do it tonight when I get home.
Mystery Orange Guy
>>11762824 >>11764581 >Hungering for more You mean that's it? >>11764675 Something where Loudred messes up and Sunflora saves his ass. I can't think of a situation, though.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
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>>11762867 Thanks.
They ship pretty well. Now, I need to think of a crazy idea for Tsundere Loudred and Omigosh Sunflora to do. Any suggestions? I might be able to do it tonight when I get home.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11764705 Loudred gets knocked out in a cave and Sunflora finds his note on the jobs board (insert some headcannon explination on how pokemon can send distress signals from the jobs board). Not knowing it was him, she sets out to save him and they discover the secrets of
love and the cave.
Does that sound alright? I think I should base it in a different dungeon than a cave though.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>11764705 No way, still have a lot to do.
Mystery Orange Guy
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>>11764880 It sounds pretty good.
Anonymous
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
What happened to the PMD Gates CYOA?
Mystery Orange Guy
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
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I guess it 404'd.
Link to the unfinished version here, just in case Nate wants to come back and finish it.
http://pastebin.com/yeJCUT9E The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
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>>11769578 I gotta stop deleting my posts too.
Nate had a CYOA up but it 404'd really fast after he fell asleep. I saved it in the link up there.
Anonymous
Does anyone have a list of unfinished requests?
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11769885 Yeah, its in the 'pastebin'. Do you want to see a list of them?
Of course, you can always do the favorite Black x Serperior.[/spoiler Anonymous
>>11769926 Last I checked, there were far more requests than those in the pastebin.
And I already wrote a Black x Serperior fic, do I need to write another one? The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11769980 I'm not the one who wants it, so I guess no. Which ones did I miss?
Anonymous
>>11770049 I'm not sure, just the last time I saw the pastebin it had some general stuff, but it never had the specific requests I saw pop up since it didn't get updated.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11770102 Okay. I'll look through what I have saved and see if I can find anymore.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Hard decision to make now. Got the Pikachu XL + Luigi & PMD.
Anonymous
>>11770157 Awesome. In the meantime, i'll work on those fics...I should have had finished like a month ago.
>>11770192 Do pushups.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>11770217 ... You're calling me fat?
Anonymous
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>>11770230 ...No, exercise is just good for you.
Just write the damn fic.
Anonymous
>>11762760 I thought it was a good start, although to me the sighing was just a tad bit overdone. Were you planning on writing more or just it being a vignette?
Mystery Orange Guy
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>>11770230 Bianca likes muscles.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
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>>11773469 Writing more at a possible later date.
Anonymous
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>>11671821 My favorite intro comes from The Gunslinger:
"The man in black fled across the desert and the gunslinger followed."
I'm also a fan of the opening to Michael Moorcock's The Stealer of Souls:
"Elric...moulder of madness, dabbler in wild delights..."
What is your fic about? You want something that grabs the attention and you want to be tacticle. Describe your scenes in terms of the five senses.
Perhaps you could open your fic by having your protagonist in the middle of a situation. I highly recommend this. You want a dynamic protagonist, not a placid one. Stories with placid protagonists typically get you more interested in the villain, because the villain is doing something. Contrast this with a protagonist who simply reacts.
For example, I like Team Rocket in the games. I enjoyed the Team Rocket set from the TCG with dark pokemon. So I might open a fic with a TR protagonist in the middle of a heist to acquire whatever TR used to create dark pokemon.
Pic related; its a Rocket's Scyther. By the TCG rules, it is considered a "Dark" pokemon.
Anonymous
>>11770192 Even if I want that Bel fic, you should rest and play videogames, a relaxing mind it's a happpy mind.
>>11769980 We always need Black x Serperior, someone own us a Mint flavored Serperior
Anonymous
>>11775418 Ugh, fine, I'll write another one...M/F or M/M?
Anonymous
how the fuck does a wooper use ice punch
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
>>11775480 M/F.
>>11775630 The same way you post in the wrong thread.
Anonymous
>>11775693 Again? Fine, I'll see what I can do.
Anonymous
>>11672117 The fic I'm working on has aspiring trainers having to travel to whatever town their regional professor is in to get a starter. Would that work? I mean, New Bark Town is pretty much on Johto's border, and the majority of the population would probably be centered on Goldenrod - it just seems kind of silly to me that ONLY local kids could get a starter (which, in this fic, are lines of Pokemon specifically bred to be ideal first Pokemon for aspiring trainers - they're not super rare).
Anonymous
>tfw having to choose between not working at all or working during daylight hours
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11776398 >implying you shouldnt just find a night job Anonymous
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>>11776450 It will be a night job, but I need to get through training during normal working hours first.
Anonymous
>>11775693 >>11775810 By the way, if I deliver another M/F Black x Serperior story, would one of you guys be willing to take on a m/m request? Or something.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
Anonymous
>Find a fanfic with an interesting concept >start reading >it's enjoyable >x chapters in you hit the last chapter >look at the header and realize the author hasn't updated it in over a year
Anonymous
>>11778483 I'm guessing that means no.
Oh well. It'll be done by tomorrow.
Unrelated, but what PMD stories have been played out? Inb4 all of them.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11780164 Dedication and time are too different things. Someone can be very devoted to their fic and can't find time to write or, in most cases, simply lost intrest over time.
Fics like those tend to get lost in time, and it's disappointing how many of them stay unfinished.
>>11780792 I said maybe. It depends greatly on what needs to be covered.
The only story that's been covered is Bidoof's Wish for now. I was thinking about doing one next week when I have time.
Anonymous
>>11780974 I'm not sure yet. I'm undecided on whether I want male x male smut or something like Paranoia Agent or Higurashi-level unhinged.
In any case I was just asking because I had an idea for a PMD fic but I wasn't going to bother if the style of story had been done to death. Pretty much all oc.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11781023 Oh, PMD fics.
No, they haven't been done and it's typically hard to do them considering the repetition of the games, but yeah, try your luck. I'll read it if you post it.
Anonymous
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>>11780164 Why not just go onto Deviantart and find one of the millions of Pokemon fanfics to read?
Anonymous
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>>11781044 It's just a faint musing at this point in time, to see if I could actually finish something multichaptered. Besides, I still have another long fic to finish.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>11781044 I'm writing one. Please update the pastebin.
The Half Blood Jester !!c0Jv54ds8J5
>>11781118 What? Didn't I already get your fic in there? Also, what genre would you define your fic as?
Working on it. Summaries are harder than they look.
Also, what do you guys want me to do with cross genres? Like if something is two genres, should I just put priority on the most overwhelming one?
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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>>11781215 Genre?
Journeyfic, basically, but not completely. It's not all done, so I don't know how it will go.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>11776129 I'm doing something similar - the only people who get starters and Pokedexes are those who can start off from a professor, everyone else starts with what they can get from wherever they are. I'm using it differently than you, though; I'm using it as a jumping-off point to build up some issues around the inherent flaws in the world presented in the game.
>>11780164 You might like Sun Soul, it's one of the better things I've read. Yeah, it admittedly is pretty edgy and shit, but I think it's one of the rare cases where that angle is played fairly decently. It's long and fully complete.
Anonymous
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>>11781458 Damn, that sounds interesting. I'd love to read it when you're done!
I'm trying to do a more realistic setting, so I've been playing around with things like levels and moves and how they work, but it's still fairly idealised.
Pokedexes, as in separate pieces of technology, are still rare and are used every several years to survey population levels. The information is freely available, and most trainers have some sort of communication gear with an app (for lack of a better word) with Pokedex information on it. Starters are a little more common, but it's still best to go to a professor directly. Sometimes they do visit other towns and cities with starters, though.
Anonymous
>>11782460 I spotted this in a thread, and it sort of inspired me. Maybe I'll expand on this later, if I'm not tired from work this week. I wonder if she'll spot this, who knows?
Typhlosion girl here. My main fantasy is to get trapped in a cave during a snowstorm with only my Typhlosion to keep me safe and warm. I begin to shiver as he cuddles next to me, I then pull him into a loving kiss as he begins to take my clothes off. He lays me on the blanket we were sitting on as he takes one of my cold, erect nipples into my mouth and begins to suck on them as I moan. His hard on pokes me as I give him a nod, sticking his throbbing hot cock into me as he fucks me, filling me with a sense of warmness as he unloads his seed into me. We kiss again as I put my clothes back on, the snowstorm still raging on as we cuddle up together and fall asleep Anonymous
>>11783750 Spotted, I don't mind though, I'd love to actually see a story, would you post it here or on fanfiction?
>>11783764 I will definitely link it here when I do it. You can always email me, and I can email you back when I finish it. It's probably easier for you to keep an eye on these threads though.
Anonymous
>>11783785 Will do, so it will be on fanfiction?
>>11783794 Possibly. I may put it on pastebin first so people here can eviscerate it and I can improve it before the real final draft ends up on fanfiction,
Anonymous
>>11783811 Okay, if you do put it on fanfiction, what's your username so I can keep an eye out for it? Either that or just tag it Typhlosion
>>11783829 My page is
http://www.fanfiction.net/~selfdeprecatingwritefag so be sure to look for it on here and there. I need to be going soon, I may work on it when I get back if my friend doesn't rope me into something.
Anonymous
>>11783851 Okay, bye, looking forward to reading it when you get to it :)
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
Anonymous
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>>11783750 >>11783785 >Hot typhlosion action I eagerly await this.
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>>11785863 Says the tripfag tripfagging in threads that aren't generals. I hope it's ironic.
Needs new thread.
Anonymous
