I updated the minor characters list with Team Buckler's info:
https://rentry.org/pmdg_clover_minor_personalities#team-bucklerWhile I was at it, I updated the table of minor characters, since it was missing entries for Dewott, Porygon2, and Ampharos. If these are your characters, feel free to change what I wrote for them in the "role" column.
https://rentry.org/pmdg_clover_minor>>54147856>>54147869Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! Your praise means a lot to me--but I also appreciate the criticism. I'll try to make my writing feel more alive and less dry. That's been a problem for a while, actually. Even before joining the guild, I've been told my writing tends to be straightforward and matter-of-fact.
And thanks for encouraging me to make the scene more romantic. I was scared I'd botch it due to inexperience, but I've been gradually growing more interested in the whole Sneaker thing, so I'm glad I pulled that trigger and finally "canonized" the idea in a story. I'll definitely try writing more Sneaker content from now on.>>54144985Nice. I'll try to read this soon.
>>54144888Very cute art. Also, nice trips. Also also, I forgot to comment on your Booker art last thread
>>54142598, but I really liked it. You're a good artist.
