So sorry for not being as active and drawing lately, random irl stuff kept me from coming to the general >>53791909https://rentry.org/mqzv9Very good story, I loved Wooper's parents and the way you described their house made it look cozy af. I was so happy seeing Chespin and Wooper sleep together again, It's unfathomably cute. The lore dump was great, makes sense his parents were insanely good
and slightly sadistic explorers. Also, Chespin's real name would be so fitting for his final evolution.
>>53795384https://rentry.org/opi29MY BOY ROSS! Loved reading that one, funny seeing him all confused in a mystery dungeon. The ghost type trying to sleep him was pretty funny.
My favorite part was the end with the Kriketune. It was a such a beautifully written part. Just, the idea of a sad, completely lost humon hearing for the first time what sounds like an instrument from his world, played by a talented Kriketune, without the expectation of an audience alone in the middle of a forest feels surreal yet beautiful. I'm happy Ross enjoyed that moment.
My headcanon of Kriketune's playing, a classic :
https://youtu.be/z7rxl5KsPjs?t=963>>53793295https://pastebin.com/C7G3EsBsAwesome introduction! it's interesting to see a kid character join the guild. His interactions with Lombre were pretty funny, props to the mexican pokemon for handling the child patiently! You have good writing skills, I really hope to read more from you.
>>53798160https://rentry.org/9sy7z#wooper-gets-smashedvery funny chapter, I love thay togepic has a good relashionship with Beast, it makes sense desu. And I was happy to see Elm at the end, I think these two would make great friends.
>the fact that Chespin hasn't attempted to kiss anyone on the lips as a greeting and hasn't asked for a license for his vines and other possible weaponry, it can be assumed he's American.fucking kek
phew, I'm up to date on every story. I think?
