Alright, let’s actually have some discussion, then.
I got to chapter 3, and it’s quite a bit better than I expected, if I’m going to be frank. I will ask: is Kenny the usual irredeemable garbage character portrayal I see in a lot of fanfics (namely Pearlshipping fanfics), because allying with Ursula is pretty fucking bad considering the shit she did to Dawn (lol I’ll use childhood trauma to win some contest round)