>>28389129It's not bad, but I recommend working on your linework and anatomy.
[WARNING: heinous nitpicking incoming]There's something about your linework that I can't quite put my finger on, but you may want to experiment with more varied brush widths. Aside from some finer details your lines are pretty uniformly thick, are you using a single brush and relying on pen pressure for different line weights? Varying line weight is important for giving a sense of depth and dynamism when you're working with thicker lines.
Also fiddle with your stabilizer settings, something is wonky there (but that might be the application's fault, you might not be able to fix it).
Getting to anatomy, you don't have any egregious errors, though I would tidy up that cameltoe if I were you - a fat mons pubis is great but her vulva should probably occupy more of her crotch if her panties are biting into her that much (I'd look at hentai for reference here). Her breasts are great, they've got weight to them and fall realistically, and her face is pretty damn cute. You do need to learn how to draw hands and feet, though. You can't hide them forever. Overall B-, good but room for improvement (and don't let my nitpicking get you down, you're better than a lot of people already. I wanted the criticism to be constructive and useful, not harmful)
