>>32067990>>32075373Love this, so gonna be perfectly honest about this.
Gladion looks perfect. The clothes fit him completely. In fact, I think I remember some fanart of Gladion in clothes extremely similar to that.
Chicken is great, but has a couple of problems. Her hands, though, look terrible. Not even gonna sugarcoat that. I prefer small hair Chicken, so maybe that's why I'm more bothered by it, but the extra hair you added lacks detail. Her original hair stands out too much, with a flower and sunlight reflecting.
Lillie is okay. I have no real problem with her design. Unlike Gladion, though, I can't say it fits her as well. Maybe it's just me. I think her light blue/white color scheme suits her the best, so seeing her in these colors is a bit weird to me. Unlike Gladion, I can't image Lillie outfit being this.
Sun is almost perfect. I'd change the eye color to match his official art, and I think his hair around neck could be a bit longer. Other than those really small details, he's perfect.
I'm not sure if this was intentional nor not, but Sun's shirt design isn't the same as his official art. Since I'm not sure if you were trying to go for the original design or not, so I don't know if this counts as a problem.
